Wow, I like that blurb. I think if you can find a way to highlight even more that you're arguing that modern representations are based on these ancient ones, it'll have even more punch. That's really the hook, and it seems a shame it's at the end, but I guess you need the lead-in to that idea.
As to hair, while I like how it is now, I really liked how bouncy it was when it was shorter. And I think either you should cut it now, or leave it be so there's plenty of it to pull back during the summer. But I really liked it bouncy and short! (Of course, this is me talking.)
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As to hair, while I like how it is now, I really liked how bouncy it was when it was shorter. And I think either you should cut it now, or leave it be so there's plenty of it to pull back during the summer. But I really liked it bouncy and short! (Of course, this is me talking.)